A good criticism of my article “India still shining?” Dawn published my article under the title ”Two different paths” . Now a writer critiques the article in a letter to Dawn’s editor here:

http://www.dawn.com/wps/wcm/connect/dawn-content-library/dawn/the-newspaper/letters-to-the-editor/putting-faith-in-pakistan-079

Definately worth reading.

The only observation I’ll make here is this: Regardless of the way it was written, it was not my intent in the article to compare a snapshot of India with a snapshot of Pakistan. That has been done many times and the writer is correct that both pictures offer a mixed bag.

The essence of the article was to look at trends , the trajectories both countries have travelled along. That is an open question and readers ought to discuss and determine for themselves.

However, a few questions:

The writer himself says that western visitors visiting the region in the 1990′s rated Pakistan’s standard of living better than India. How come they have stopped visiting Pakistan since then? Meanwhile, how many western expats have moved to live and work in Mumbai … just Mumbai, and with their families? I don’t know but maybe somebody here can provide us an answer. Have we come down the right path? When will these visitors start visiting Pakistan again? We need to think. Maybe all is not well.

The writer again seems to blame Pakistan’s woes on “America’s war against the Soviets in the 1980′s”. But weren’t we calling it jihad … and wasn’t it being waged in the name of the faith?

On the assertion of Pakistani professionals doing well in the west. Is this because of our education system or despite it? Something to think about.

How much research is coming out of the writer’s Engineering Institute where he says he studied in Karachi? How many scholarly articles were published in engineering journals by its faculty say in the last 10 years?

I have chosen not to get into the subject of India Vs China, Japan Korea etc and I would like to explain my reasons. 1) It is beyond the scope of my piece which is primarily about Pakistan.2) The discussion is beyond my “bandwidth” … meaning I do not have enough know how and stamina and 3) maybe its best for the Indians to take that initiative.

Moazzam Husain

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